tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197775029374863877.post3698301511551718968..comments2010-09-16T21:32:35.183-04:00Comments on Resonics Chronicles: Random Bit of WritingJ. R. Calvohttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11418113175246324025noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197775029374863877.post-88060519988596300622010-07-15T23:23:43.352-04:002010-07-15T23:23:43.352-04:00keep up this level of work and we're gonna mak...keep up this level of work and we're gonna make you write us a movie!Elmwood Productionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519503318671396152noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197775029374863877.post-84736349332501802082010-07-13T11:28:26.368-04:002010-07-13T11:28:26.368-04:00A fair point. I was going for the mix of excitemen...A fair point. I was going for the mix of excitement and fear, similar to a person scuba diving for the first time. They know in their head the gear will sustain them, but the claustrophobia and disorientation jars them. I was also tempted to insert a mech AI, but decided against it as the silence of the piece seems to make it more personal.J. R. Calvohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11418113175246324025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8197775029374863877.post-11618807690885508842010-07-13T08:44:28.077-04:002010-07-13T08:44:28.077-04:00Cool. I think it's rather brilliant that you d...Cool. I think it's rather brilliant that you described how each 'mech' has its own identity. As a reader, one thing that I found slightly contradicting was when you first described the armour as a protector, but later referred to it as a "walking coffin".onihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00826913158717010235noreply@blogger.com